【答案】DearTom,
An earthquake may hit our area atany time.Do you know what to do in an earthquake?Let me tell you.
During an earthquake,if you areoutside,you must stay in the open air and keep away frombuildings,trees and other dangerous things.If you are inside,you muststay in a corner,or get under a desk or a table.If you are driving acar,you must quickly drive to the side of the road and stop it.If youare trapped in the ruins,please be calm and wait for the rescue teamto help.After an earthquake,you should check everyone in yourfamily,and see whether gas pipes,water pipes,and electric lines areOK.You must keep the telephone wire clear.
Do you think I am right?Lookingforward to your reply.
Yours,
LiHua
【解析】
【分析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给美国朋友Tom写一封信,简要谈一下你面对地震时的具体做法。
【详解】第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态为一般现在时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1. 词数100左右；
2.可以适当发挥,以使行文连贯。
第二步:列提纲（重点词组）
hit one’sarea; stay in the open air；keepaway from；stayin a corner；theside of the road；betrappedin; be calm; wait for; gas pipes; water pipes; electric lines; keepsth clear; look forward to
第三步：连词成句
1. An earthquake may hit our areaat any time.
2. During an earthquake, if youare outside, you must stay in the open air and keep away frombuildings, trees and other dangerous things.
3. If you are inside, you muststay in a corner, or get under a desk or a table.
4. If you are driving a car, youmust quickly drive to the side of the road and stop it.
5. If you are trapped in theruins, please be calm and wait for the rescue team to help.
6. After anearthquakeyou should check everyone in your family, and see whether gas pipes,water pipes, and electric lines are OK.
7.You must keep the telephonewire clear.
8. Looking forward to your reply.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1.表文章结构顺序：Firstof all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second…And then, Finally, In the end, At last（供参考）
2.表并列补充关系：Whatis more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, notonly…but(also), including（供参考）
3.表转折对比关系：However,On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句),In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,Onthe other hand…Some…,whileothers…,asfor, so…that…（供参考）
4.表因果关系：Because,As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result （供参考）
连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，
【点睛】[高分句型1]During an earthquake, if you are outside, you must stay in the openair and keep away from buildings, trees and other dangerousthings.（由if引导的条件状语从句）
[高分句型2]After an earthquake,you should check everyone in your family,and seewhether gas pipes,water pipes,and electric lines areOK.（whether引导的宾语从句）
